Crazy colored boogers flyin' out the nose...hmmm...It seems pretty KAWS-esque to me:) Color balance is better, would have liked a little variation in value on the rounded forms, but that's getting nitpicky. Would it be too much to do some comic book-style line art over the photo of you? Not telling you you have to do it or anything, just asking if you considered it as a possibility- it might've looked pretty cool. Like the composition, lot of good movement, 3D space. Good work!
I agree! This looks great! I'm with Sweney about a little comic book-style somethin' somethin'. Maybe play with a half tone on the background. That could help the background and the face be a little more cohesive. Right now the face is still kind of stuck in there. You are doing great with this style though. Keep it up! I'm excited to see more! -Estrella P.
Crazy colored boogers flyin' out the nose...hmmm...It seems pretty KAWS-esque to me:) Color balance is better, would have liked a little variation in value on the rounded forms, but that's getting nitpicky. Would it be too much to do some comic book-style line art over the photo of you? Not telling you you have to do it or anything, just asking if you considered it as a possibility- it might've looked pretty cool. Like the composition, lot of good movement, 3D space. Good work!
ReplyDeleteI agree! This looks great! I'm with Sweney about a little comic book-style somethin' somethin'. Maybe play with a half tone on the background. That could help the background and the face be a little more cohesive. Right now the face is still kind of stuck in there. You are doing great with this style though. Keep it up! I'm excited to see more!
ReplyDelete-Estrella P.